Saturday, January 14, 2012

Faint

You emptied out your mind
leaving behind you a visible trail
before realizing that the ground
was the last thing you wanted to feel.
Posted by kaleb (worst) at Saturday, January 14, 2012

1 comment:

  1. NicoleJanuary 14, 2012 at 7:10 PM

    I'll leave a general comment, because I love all these little four line poems, simple and eager. Good language, and small images that I really like. Good to see you're still at it, hope to see you in the coming semester :)

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